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Re: The Epic Chronicles of Ikros continue to continue!
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Fri, 20 Jul 2001 04:58:00 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Matt Brooks writes:
> Anthony Sava wrote:
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> > PLMKWYT
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> > http://www.geocities.com/savatheaggie/legohome.html
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> > --Anthony
> Hey Anthony!
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> These chapters look great! I IM'd you with some (minor) changes to 15 &
> 16. I didn't go back to 12-14 to see if you picked up all the changes,
> but I'm sure you did. ;-)
All changes have been uploaded, thanks!
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> I want to reiterate the comments I shared with you on IM. I really enjoy
> the turn your story has taken with Book II. Moving more towards
> exposition, and "story telling", rather than predominately action
> sequences. The back-story of Garalt, and the other tidbits from
> historical Ikros are huge steps in establishing a "personality" for your
> kingdom! I'm looking forward to Book Three and the introduction of Big
> Red!
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> Keep up the good work!
The rest of Book two will most likely alternate between story telling and
action shots. Book Three will be my attempt at doing both at the same time.
Book four i'm hoping will be as spectacular as it is in my mind. There are
MANY more surprises in store.
And as for Big Red, he's gonna throw a part-ay!
--Anthony
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