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The next chapter in my castle story is up.
You can see it at:
http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
It's accessible directly from the Updates section on the main page, or from
the Stories page.
As always, comments and criticism are appreciated. Let me know what you think.
--William
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| (...) Cool chapter. The best was with the spider. That was a great idea not to mention a cool spider. I also finally read chapter one. All and all bothe were great. (22 years ago, 11-Jul-02, to lugnet.castle)
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| great story! excellent use of simple backgrounds! criticism: the whole thing about the prince. it pops up at the end of chap. 1 and ends shortly into chap. 2. hopefully this means its not a dead subplot, because i don't see where its going. also you (...) (22 years ago, 11-Jul-02, to lugnet.castle)
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