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Brilliant.
Great original story and some very nice photography. Creates a great mood.
Creepy space sci-fi like 2001. Very nice constructions. And some of the best
interior photos Ive ever seen for a space MOC. Great sense of humor.
I *liked* the pacing--I think it works well, so long as the viewer is on a fast
connection and doesnt have to wait for the images to load. I dont think many
stories could work well at that pace, but it really works here.
I kind of like the open-ended ending--or is it obvious whats going to happen
and Im missing it? I assumed the thing coming through the viewport toward the
end was some sort of egg--that it was reproducing. Yikes, maybe it was going to
mate!
(shudder)
-Brendan
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I kind of like the open-ended ending--or is it obvious whats going to happen
and Im missing it? I assumed the thing coming through the viewport toward
the end was some sort of egg--that it was reproducing. Yikes, maybe it was
going to mate!
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Well if thats it was, maybe Jungle Lust (tm) would work better as a scent
than Cinnamon?
Anyway, if thats whats going on there, the monster apparently has good taste,
as Princess Leia has been slumming again.
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Brilliant.
Great original story and some very nice photography. Creates a great mood.
Creepy space sci-fi like 2001. Very nice constructions. And some of the
best interior photos Ive ever seen for a space MOC. Great sense of humor.
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Thanks. Ive always admired your skill with minifig scenes. My interior shots
benefited from some experiments I did with shadows a while back. The shadows are
manipulated for mood and atmosphere.
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I *liked* the pacing--I think it works well, so long as the viewer is on a
fast connection and doesnt have to wait for the images to load. I dont
think many stories could work well at that pace, but it really works here.
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I didnt want to reveal the creature too soon in the show. I was building up
plausibility for the scenario, making the audience food for the creature, just
like the moonbase crew. You want a cinnamon bun, dont you. Stale moon muffin?
Blech. :-) And of course the exterior scenes are in lunar slow motion.
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I kind of like the open-ended ending--or is it obvious whats going to happen
and Im missing it? I assumed the thing coming through the viewport toward
the end was some sort of egg--that it was reproducing. Yikes, maybe it was
going to mate!
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Ah, the ovipositor. You missed the Explorovore thread that explains the
exobiology.
K
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