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Subject:	My first vignette--The Apology
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Date:	Fri, 21 Apr 2006 02:33:05 GMT
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This MOC was built to compliment a haiku I recently wrote. The haiku is titled “The Apology.”

I like you, but not
Enough to take you to the
Hospital. Sorry.

Please let me know what you think.

Derek

Subject:	Re: My first vignette--The Apology
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Date:	Fri, 21 Apr 2006 15:46:18 GMT
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In lugnet.build.vignette, Derek Schin wrote:

This MOC was built to compliment a haiku I recently wrote. The haiku is titled “The Apology.”

I like you, but not
Enough to take you to the
Hospital. Sorry.

Please let me know what you think.

Derek

I think that’s the funniest haiku I’ve ever read, and the vig matches it perfectly. Awesomes.

[ j o n ]
[ z e m i d o t n e t ]
:: creations
:: moonbase
:: shipyard

Subject:	Re: My first vignette--The Apology
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Date:	Mon, 24 Apr 2006 17:32:09 GMT
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In lugnet.build.vignette, Derek Schin wrote: > > Please let me know what you think. > > Derek Get over it dude Make peace with your mom, she is not that bad in bed Awesome D, you hit one out of the park on your first vig attempt. So...what, you're the soldier-poet now? I bet that plays well with the Ukrainian girls. -Keith

Subject:	Re: My first vignette--The Apology
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Date:	Tue, 25 Apr 2006 18:07:49 GMT
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In lugnet.build.vignette, Derek Schin wrote:

This MOC was built to compliment a haiku I recently wrote. The haiku is titled “The Apology.”

I like you, but not
Enough to take you to the
Hospital. Sorry.

Teddy Kennedy, eat your heart out!

Subject:	Re: My first vignette--The Apology
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Date:	Thu, 27 Apr 2006 02:07:08 GMT
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In lugnet.build.vignette, Jon Palmer wrote:

I think that’s the funniest haiku I’ve ever read, and the vig matches it perfectly. Awesomes.

Thanks Jon--I’m going to use this quote on the back of my book when it comes out.

Derek

Subject:	Re: My first vignette--The Apology
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Date:	Thu, 27 Apr 2006 02:20:03 GMT
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In lugnet.build.vignette, Keith Goldman wrote: > Awesome D, you hit one out of the park on your first vig attempt. So...what, > you're the soldier-poet now? I bet that plays well with the Ukrainian girls. Thanks Keith--Dan said your man-crush on me was getting out of hand, and I guess he was right. Derek

Subject:	Re: My first vignette--The Apology
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Date:	Thu, 27 Apr 2006 02:21:18 GMT
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In lugnet.build.vignette, Edward Welsh wrote:

Teddy Kennedy, eat your heart out!

I’m only sorry that I couldn’t squeeze a car into the vignette...

Derek

Subject:	Re: My first vignette--The Apology
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Date:	Thu, 27 Apr 2006 17:17:36 GMT
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In lugnet.build.vignette, Derek Schin wrote:

This MOC was built to compliment a haiku I recently wrote. The haiku is titled “The Apology.”

I like you, but not
Enough to take you to the
Hospital. Sorry.

Please let me know what you think.

Derek

Your poetry, like
A kick to the groin, causes
Scrotal discomfort.

Yay, haiku! This is a festive vignette. Very reminiscent of one of my favorite jokes of all time.

-nk