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Subject: 
Re: Joe Vig: 'In the media...' (my first vignette/Joe Vig)
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Mon, 16 Jan 2006 01:33:28 GMT
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In lugnet.build.vignette, Melody Brown wrote:

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   He has been selling his books on auction sites like eWay and making stacks of cash! His biggest sellers are by writers such as William Shakespear and other titles such as ‘The Black Swan’ and ‘Only the tip of the Iceberg’...


First, please let me say that this is a very nice Vignette! I really like the shelving and the cart that Joe Vig is using. However, without your narration, the viewer would have no idea of what is going on - it looks like Joe is just visiting his local library. Perhaps you should consider changing the name of your Brickshelf folder to describe what the action is...

Having said all this... Please support your local library!
After all, “Knowledge is power!”


“Big Daddy” Nelson



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  Joe Vig: 'In the media...' (my first vignette/Joe Vig)
 
Hello all, here is my first vignette and my first Joe Vig ;) I hope you like him... "Oh no!" Joe has been a naughty boy! He is about to get caught red handed when he leaves the bookstore (Books R' Us) and is targeted by police, as the staff have (...) (18 years ago, 15-Jan-06, to lugnet.build.vignette, FTX) !! 

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