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Re: Another Introduction and space moc thrown in for flavor...
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lugnet.space
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Sat, 27 Nov 2004 13:41:57 GMT
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In lugnet.space, Peter Roberts wrote:
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> The bottom looks good and the bottom section of the actual station. However, I
> think the top section is far to square and flat... Nothing seems to be
> happening. The interior is quite good except for the fact that a huge section
> of it is empty. To me it just seems strange to have the bedrooms so cramped
> when you have all that spare space. On your mocpages site you said, 'By the
> time the comm signals actual reach the planet, they have grown much fainter,
> thus requiring the comm station to amplify and relay them to the planet below.'
> This does not seem realistic looking at this model. All they seem to have is
> equipment for a TV and perhaps satelite TV as well. The blank and boring top of
> this model would be a good place to put a huge satelite dish. I see that there
> are no pictures of the interior of the lower section. I that because you
> couldn't get to it? It would be good if you made the model in a way that could
> be deconstructed.
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> Sorry if I sounded very harsh in that last paragraph, but I'm one these people
> who feels that I should say what the model actually is like (not necessarily
> what the builder wants to hear), regardless of the age of the builder, using
> constructive criticisms. Anyway, I'm 14 as well, so it's not as if I'm looking
> at your model and thinking, 'that's good for someone 20 years younger than me.'
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> I really do like the bottom half of your MOC, some great SNOT techniques and a
> satisfying outcome. I know you've taken it apart now, but I were you to do it
> again, I'd say to heavily modify the top, or totally rebuild it, particularly on
> the side with the window.
I really appreciate this. Now that I have taken it appart, I see a LOT of things
that I should have changed. I much rather have some one tell me how to improve
so I can do just that than have some one tell me a not so good creation is good.
Thanks
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