this is sleek. and i really like your story line developement too. However, I think that the theme is too off the shelf. I think that it might be the overwhelming nature of those yellow parts that are so recognizable or something. I'd love to see a (...) (22 years ago, 7-Mar-03, to lugnet.loc.au, lugnet.space)
Armstrong Stellardynamics I12 Wasp (URL) little ships are routinely encountered around New Pacific Border Outposts and in the Administered Traffic Lanes (ATLs). They are the leading edge of New Pacific's administrative and security monitoring and (...) (22 years ago, 6-Mar-03, to lugnet.loc.au, lugnet.space)
