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Re: New Website: Toradoch Systems Launch
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Sat, 17 Aug 2002 18:32:59 GMT
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"Gil Shaw" <NIXtoradochSPAM@hotmail.com> wrote in message
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> Greetings,
>
> It is with high aspirations and sweaty palms that the board of Toradoch
> Systems announces the launch of their website to bring the products of the
> future to the consumers of today:
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> http://home.cogeco.ca/~sshaw/Toradoch/ToradochHome.htm
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> Not a lot of text with most of the navigation through icons and banners.
> Cruise around, explore, have fun....and be kind - my first attempt at this
> brave, unknown world.
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> Please let me know what you think and ANY input or advice technical, • content
> or artistic is greatly appreciated.
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> Optimal viewing is at 1024x768 fullscreen. Unsure of how frames or • Netscape
> will interrpret the pages.
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> Cheers,
> -Gil
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> PS. Many thanks to Jon Palmer for direction helping me get this gig
started.
Looks techy and futuristic - I think you got it right. It sounds like you
want nit pick details, so here are a couple:
In the defense section, each sub-topic has a letter ending with a long black
bar - except for Interspace, which has long black bar, then ending letter.
I know you can't put the bar on the end of the E, but maybe put the bar
first for the other two (the D and the V of GrounD and AerograV)?
Only other comment is the home page. It looks a little too simple in
general and compared to the other division pages. Maybe a short paragraph
about the company (how it started, who'd the CEO - as if we didn't know ;)
on the main page and then arrange the links vertically like the other sub
pages. A short blurb about each division might be good too.
Oh, another idea! You should get some of those little pictures of people
working together on stuff - you know, politically correct pictures of
different races and different sexes working on a computer. Like the stuff
all these big engineering company web pages have. Definitely you need the
one with the guy sitting at the computer with the other person over his
shoulder helping him out. Maybe also a closeup of some piece of technology.
A rendering of a single part on single color background? I just imagine a
few pictures scattered across the home page to make it one of those "wow,
what a great place; I want to work there!" kind of pages.
I like the way each division page has its own personality - as if they are
all owned by one umbrella company, but independantly run.
Well, I wish I had the patience (or the expertise, for that matter) to soup
up my page, but for now, it'll just have to remain one long scroll. Keep up
the good work! A very clean, easy to navigate, and good looking page.
-- Tom
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| (...) Many thanks Tom! (...) Actually, they all are just a bar merged with the right half of a letter. I think the Interspace one show up more because of the features of the 'E'. Sadly, my vector graphics program is both old and limited. (...) I was (...) (22 years ago, 19-Aug-02, to lugnet.space)
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| Greetings, It is with high aspirations and sweaty palms that the board of Toradoch Systems announces the launch of their website to bring the products of the future to the consumers of today: (URL) a lot of text with most of the navigation through (...) (22 years ago, 16-Aug-02, to lugnet.space, lugnet.announce)
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