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In lugnet.castle, daniel ravenda wrote:
> I am writing this message to practice good grammar. So here goes nothing.
> In three years I will begin illustrating my 3 book series. It is being written
> right now. Also Mr. Hall nice job on that tower ;). Another thing, Sava when
> will you update the story? I've been waiting a while. (lol)
> What is a good web host to do a Lego story on anyway?
> Well I hope this grammar is good.
>
> Dan Ravenda
GREAT improvement, Dan! :-)
Thanks for taking the time to post a message like this. I have a lot more
respect for you now that I see a demonstrated effort on your part. I hope you'll
find that more take you seriously when you take care to watch your spelling and
grammar. You're on the right track. Always put energy into improving; writing
well is a constant learning process and a valuable skill.
If you ever want suggestions on how to improve, feel free to shoot me an email.
Time permitting, I'll take a look at posts, stories, etc, and offer a kind,
constructive critique.
-Tim
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