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Re: mission statement
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lugnet.org.us.indylug
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Mon, 16 Sep 2002 17:15:32 GMT
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In lugnet.org.us.indylug, Steve Hassenplug writes:
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> > As Adult Fans of Lego in central Indiana, we gather to share ideas,
> > accomplishments, and the enjoyment of creating with Lego bricks.
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> This sounds awkward to me: "...gather to share ... the enjoyment of creating..."
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> But I'm not sure I have a better suggestion.
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> Maybe:
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> As Adult Fans of Lego in central Indiana, we gather to share ideas, accomplishments, and fun of creating with Lego bricks.
How about:
As Adult Fans of LEGO in Indiana, we enjoy creating with LEGO bricks and
sharing our ideas and accomplishments.
Eric
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| (...) This sounds awkward to me: "...gather to share ... the enjoyment of creating..." But I'm not sure I have a better suggestion. Maybe: As Adult Fans of Lego in central Indiana, we gather to share ideas, accomplishments, and fun of creating with (...) (22 years ago, 16-Sep-02, to lugnet.org.us.indylug)
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