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Re: Somebody help.
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lugnet.general
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Thu, 14 Oct 1999 10:10:20 GMT
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liam.parnell@documentSPAMLESS.co.uk
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Mike wrote:
> > > Then again, maybe she won't. Write a non-sappy non-love poem and
> > > ask her to read it. Some girls like that, and everyone needs to
> > > write at least a little poetry every now and then.
> > >
> > > --
> >
> > I've got a problem, I can't write poems, can you?
>
> I write a lot, yeah. But you don't want me to write one for you,
> you want to do it yourself. And you _can_ write poetry. Everyone
> can.
>
> Poetry doesn't have to rhyme, have perfect meter, or anything else,
> it just has to come from your muse, and everyone has one. :)
I've never really understood this poetry lark, but the realization has
just occured to me that it is much like Lego. You have a idea of what
you are trying to do, you scrabble around for the right pieces, then you
try to get them to click together, to achieve a harmonious whole.
Here is my very first MOC. It is inspired by 6097 Night Lord's Castle.
Twelve chosen men construct a tower
of blackened bricks and place on top
a wizened crone of evil power
whose time has come to get the chop.
Her nose is bent her mouth is torn
Her bony hands will find no mate
Her crimes began with being born
Upon her face is stamped her fate.
What other work but Devil's Whore?
Can mortal men condemn the Witch?
"Who cares!" they roar,
"Let's burn the bitch!"
--
Liam.
http://web.ukonline.co.uk/liamp/
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