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Subject:	Chapter Four has arrived!
Newsgroups:	lugnet.castle, lugnet.announce, lugnet.general
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Date:	Thu, 21 Mar 2002 02:58:14 GMT
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Hey guys and gals, After weeks of promising, here it is, the fourth chapter in the chronicles of Velaria! It's been added to my site: http://velaria.8m.com/ under the Chronicles section, but if going there on your own is too much work, here's a direct link: http://velaria.8m.com/chapterfour.html As always, I love to hear feedback, be it good or bad! Later, -Jay (the Rascal King) http://velaria.8m.com/

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		Re: Chapter Four has arrived!
(...) Good stuff as always. Sounds like we've reached the end of the backstory, eh? Does this mean we'll get to read that cool first chapter again? :) I also really like the new format, makes it much easier to read. Keep it up! --Anthony (23 years ago, 22-Mar-02, to lugnet.castle)

		Re: Chapter Four has arrived!
always great! criticism: as time progresses more and more happens quicker, and it seems to start buring it here. i didn't really feel like chap4 was an entire 'age', which would presumably have a solid beginning and end (some historically important (...) (23 years ago, 22-Mar-02, to lugnet.castle)

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