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Re: Cave of Exile: Revised
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Wed, 4 Jul 2001 20:07:42 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org.cw, Wilson Raska writes:
> Okay, after my original posting of my story, I recieved a lot of feedback.
> A couple of you suggested to lose the large print on the spells, so I got
> rid of those. Jeff Stemble also suggested to make the pictures darker, so I
> did that also. I really think the darker images make the story a little
> moodier than it was previously. So go have a look at my revised Cave of • Exile:
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> http://www.sofast.net/~raska/exilestory.html
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> Thanks everyone for all the great feedback and constructive criticizm!
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> Wilson
As always Wilson, good stuff. Though I thought it was cool to see the spell
names, you know, very final fantasy-esqe, I do like the story better without
them. The story is much better with all the revisions you've made, though I
only have one point of constructive criticism: Write the rest of the story, I
wanna know what happens!
--Anthony
http://www.geocities.com/savatheaggie/legohome.html
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| Okay, after my original posting of my story, I recieved a lot of feedback. A couple of you suggested to lose the large print on the spells, so I got rid of those. Jeff Stemble also suggested to make the pictures darker, so I did that also. I really (...) (23 years ago, 4-Jul-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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