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Cave of Exile: Revised
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lugnet.castle.org.cw
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Wed, 4 Jul 2001 18:41:27 GMT
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Okay, after my original posting of my story, I recieved a lot of feedback.
A couple of you suggested to lose the large print on the spells, so I got
rid of those. Jeff Stemble also suggested to make the pictures darker, so I
did that also. I really think the darker images make the story a little
moodier than it was previously. So go have a look at my revised Cave of Exile:
http://www.sofast.net/~raska/exilestory.html
Thanks everyone for all the great feedback and constructive criticizm!
Wilson
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| (...) Exile: (...) As always Wilson, good stuff. Though I thought it was cool to see the spell names, you know, very final fantasy-esqe, I do like the story better without them. The story is much better with all the revisions you've made, though I (...) (23 years ago, 4-Jul-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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