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> I've already received several comments about toning down the magic.
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> As well as more than one comment on wanting a story concerning the mercenary
> group known as 'The Jackals.'
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> So, any takers? What would you like to see come next in my story? Anyone want
> to put in their two cents? Or even simple feedback? Who likes cheese?
But there are just so many different types of cheese!
What I would like to see is short stories. What I've found about your story is
that so many characters have so much background.. and this is a fertile place
for short stories. Pick interesting characters that seemed a bit in the
background, and just give them their moment in the light.
ie.
Lord Daravon
Sir Kullvox
Early life of Demonclaw and Greylen
Post Immortal War Adventures of Demonclaw and Greylen
(i'm a greylen fan)
The Jackals
And you could also expound upon less chronicle worthy moments of main
characters..
ie. garalt becoming a knight
the orc incident with garadaine
etc.
I think the chronicles should continue, maybe even following the evolution of
the decendants of garalt. i think short stories are a way to flush out details
found in the larger Chronicles, and maybe serve as a break if you're getting
run down on the chronicles at any time (ie. i'm tired of garadaine, lets have a
story with young greylen for a while..).
So, what kind of time table are we looking at for chaos skies? be finished in
a month? two months? hmm?
anyways, keep up the good work, and I'd love to see more!
-crackhead lenny
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