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| Hey Ryan, great story! I couldn't resist taking the bait :) A couple things about your story though. The background you have chosen kind of interferes with the text and makes it harder to read. May I suggest a solid background, maybe? Also, the (...) (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) Thankyou very much for taking a look at my story! Also thanx for the hints on the story background, i will definetly be changeing that. As far as proofreading, hehehe, i know, i know! :) I got my dad to read the story after I had posted it (...) (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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