 | | My lego rpg story, amongst others... —Matt Hein
| | | | I noticed there wasn't much activity here at .castle, so I decided to go along and present to you, one of my lego RPG stories, for your enjoyment... I just recently completed a text only excerpt from my work in progress. Of course, I'll have the (...) (22 years ago, 21-Nov-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
| | | | | | | | | | Re: My lego rpg story, amongst others... —Leonard Hoffman
| | | | | i usually don't read stories without lego, but i'd like to comment a further piece of advice to make your work more approachable. simply put, your paragraphs are too long. i see a screen's worth of solid text and i blank out. if you could divide (...) (22 years ago, 21-Nov-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
| | | | | | | | | | | | Re: My lego rpg story, amongst others... —Matt Hein
| | | | | (...) Five minutes, problem fixed... Now, if anyone will please forward me the appropriate feedback on this subject, that would be great. And no, you won't blank out this instance (or at least I hope... ^_^) Thank you, <<_Matt Hein_>> Fellow lego (...) (22 years ago, 22-Nov-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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