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In lugnet.org.ca.rtltoronto, Benjamin Medinets writes:
> Hi, this is another story I wrote about a week ago.
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> It doesn't yet have any pictures yet... :(
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> but it should be an interesting read.
right on that.
[snip...an interesting story...]
Hmm...I can't say the story was an exactly "traditional" chapter,
but perhaps it is an vague introduction for what's to come next?
Just a question, though. IS the main character in the story refering
to you, or a sort of alternate reality for yourself (sort of a
parallel character?), or was this entirely coincidental? (nah!)
Some of the detail oseems plausible, but I would suggest adding
more minute details, to the setting, such as the time,
place, background details, weather, etc. Just a suggestion to
increment the reading...
It was an interesting read, though, and I look forward to seeing
pictures to compliment it.
<<_Matt Hein_>>
Lugnet No. 1112
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