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History of Tarharis
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Wed, 27 Feb 2002 02:18:36 GMT
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The Knight's Sword
A violent battle had occurred, the Royal Knights Castle was almost lost to
the Dark Lord. He stood and watched. He was in black armor and had a long
black sword. He walked toward the massive, wood doors and watched them
chopped down. The iron portcullis was supported up and the Dark Lord walked
into the castle. He hacked through the men and made his way to the outer
wall. When he got on top of the wall, he continued attacking. With one
swing, three men went flying. When the wall was cleared off, he made his way
to the throne and killed the king.
Three months later the Dark Lord and some of his men left on an expidition.
They never returned.
One month later the Royal Knights gained control of the castle.
Two thousand years past and little happened. Forteen years later, a boy
was born. His name Valdimir.
--Kevin W. §
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| (...) Kevin, Sounds like a great start for a story! A lot of time went by in between... But I like how you end the history with a boy being born. It gives people a sense of expectation and foreshadowing, perhaps, that he is bound for greatness... (...) (22 years ago, 27-Feb-02, to lugnet.castle)
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