(...) Good to see more of the story. It moves quite quickly and occassionally it takes a sec to work out that characters know each other. Otherwise, I liked seeing the custom torsos (and skirts) and the spell effects, feel free to give more (...) (23 years ago, 11-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle)
(...) I like the chapter, the format as cool, and as James said - very nice effects and customs. Good work, keep it up! Since you're working with pictures, you should be doubly careful with typos - it's hard to fix them later on. :-/ Also, as a (...) (23 years ago, 1-Dec-01, to lugnet.castle)
