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| (...) Thanks much! I don't know if I'll be putting out a new movie, I'm all out of good* music! But maybe, just maybe I can scrounge something up. (...) Chapter one of Chaos Skies won't be ready till at least after Christmas, if not after the new (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| Hi Matt, I had a similar reaction. I couldn't find my way through your sentences. And I am a very skilled reader. (...) Your poetry is fine but your sentences are too long. (...) Nah, the sentences are just too long. Your poetry and meaning are (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Well, that's a shame to hear... When I write, I tend to place it in a poetic stance, however, I've seen the notion that some people prefer the more 'straightforward' type of writing, which I find rather boring. (...) You'll find (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| Well, Matt, I'm not sure how much my comments will be "appreciated" as they are going to be in the vein of "discouraging words". I got about half-way through the second line of the first sentence, then pretty much gave up. I scrolled down through (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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| (...) Did you mean by any chance, your story dwarfs in five dollar words compared to mine, or the other way around? Hmm...^_^ (...) Thanks for the feedback. (...) Heh...I hardly read enough as is...I draw a lot of anime, though, so that's a source (...) (22 years ago, 17-Dec-02, to lugnet.castle, lugnet.general)
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