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In lugnet.space, Jeff Szklennik wrote:
> Overall it's really cool. Looks like it would be a cool ship to see in a movie
> come quickly swooping in & lift the cargo container off. The wings are a bit to
> long for my taste, BUT if there's no gravity assist, then you'd probably need
> the length. Oddly, the length of the wings is what makes it visually dynamic
> for that swooping in scene I mentioned, heh.
I tried to make them kinda long so i could toss on lots of greeblies.
> The gun barrels are also too long
> in my opinion, maybe half as long would be fine-they're visually dominating for
> a detail (on a freighter no less--unless you're smuggling :) .) The forms,
> colors, & greeblies are all well done.
Well, a military freighter then. Glad you like the other stuff tho.
> The cargo container seems to be lacking
> some similar colors & forms that would visually link it to the freighter (maybe
> add some gray, similar corners, truncations, etc.)
Yup, im working on that. My collection of grey is kinda depleted at the moment,
unfortunately.
SNIP
> Anyways, VERY good work here; keep it up.
>
> Jeff
Thanks for the feedback. Its always nice to know what i can fix and what people
like.
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