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Re: The Brick Testament - David vs Saul
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Fri, 6 Jul 2007 18:30:33 GMT
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Hey Brendan,

Another great outing.

Pin the spear on the minstrel - I like the inset pillars on the wall of Saul’s main hall. Also, the spear decoration is a nice idea, but I’m not 100% on the execution. I wish the clips for the third and fifth spears were somehow in a nicer arch with the other clips. I don’t have a good build solution to do so, though. In 10-11 that’s a great solution to account for both whatever’s holding the spears and also the holes in that tapestry piece and make them naturally part of the scene. In 12, is there a specific identity for the guy standing next to David who’s not just another soldier? He’s not in the next two scenes.

Unique wedding gifts - In the first scene I really like the front of that building. What are those squares - the bases of jack stone pillars? Also the wheel above the door is great - is that simply held by gravity? I do think there are missed opportunities in this story for references to your homoerotic reading of David and Jonathan - perhaps Jonathan should be hiding out watching Michal watching David? In 18:22 I like the wall detail of having a gap with studs above and below. Great floor patern as usual. A barrel overflowing with bloody foreskins is gory in the manner we all want from the BT. In the wedding scene, I love the flower garland. Threading those must have been a bear.

If at first you don’t succeed, kill kill again - Hmm, in 1-3 I don’t think that lid is going to fit the barrel - won’t Saul be suspicious when he see’s David’s fingers holding it up? :) The bridge, complete with Jar-jar head, is outstanding. Is that head merely propped up there? I also like the micro castle in the background - I’ll have to note that on microbricks. The scene of lowering David out of the window is very effective, and using the teddybear as a decoy is funny.

Do the hokey pokey - Hmm, I’m not a big fan of the teepee; it seems very out of place, though once you’ve committed to teepees, the microscale versions are a cute solution. In 24, the tall naked Saul is surprisingly effective.

BFF - More forays into the homoerotic reading of David and Jonathan. While I understand that this is a potential reading of this relationship, and it fits in with the less than reverent treatment in general, I do have to say that I don’t like way that some will assume that any close male relationship must be so (like, for instance, Jesus and John, or Frodo and Sam) (btw, I’m not saying that you do this in general), especially in this case since David is sort of aggressively heterosexual - multi wives, having Uriah killed because he was lusting after Bathsheba, many children. Of course one could argue that this simply says he was aggressively sexual and that he could have been bi, but this was in a very anti-homosexual culture. Anyway, I’m sure others have discussed the relationship of David and Jonathan to death, and I’m generally more interested in the LEGO aspects. That said, the “running into the field” scene is great and very romantic - maybe it could have used a few flowers in the field. In general this whole story was very well shot. In 33 I particularly like how the spear is suspended off-screen. In 35,41 I don’t think the kneeling David works very well - at first I was confused as to what that was supposed to be. In 41 there’s a nice subtle bending of David’s legs that is effective.

Hee hee, he said “nob” - The floor here is very nice. At first I thought it was a headlight mosaic, but it’s just plain old studs-up tiles (hmm, maybe that’s an oxymoron). Also the wall made of Jack Stone pillars is good. Doeg lurking in the background is very effective. I assume we’ll see him again. I like the all-yellow alcove set off from the gray room. In that alcove, what is the groove in the wall about 6 bricks above the floor? For some reason I’m not a fan of the cloth wrapped around the sword - it somehow seems “unLEGO”, even though I assume that is official.

Looking forward to the next installments.

Bruce



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(...) Thanks! (...) Those are the very same pillars seen in Saul's throne room. Modular building is fun. (...) Yeah, I tired out numerous configurations of elements to try to get a nice fan shape for the spears and that was the one that looked best, (...) (17 years ago, 7-Jul-07, to lugnet.build.ancient, FTX)

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(URL) The Brick Testament> has been updated today with six new illustrated stories from the book of 1 Samuel. It is the beginning of a brand new section of the website entitled (URL) David vs Saul>: (2 URLs) Tries to Kill David> (2 URLs) Mutilates (...) (17 years ago, 30-Jun-07, to lugnet.announce.moc, lugnet.build.ancient, FTX) ! 

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