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Submitted for your approval, a KeithLUG cooperative build with Ryan Rubino and Mike Rutherford. New-look MOCpages (URL) Or Wave of the future Flickr? (URL) As always, your witty commentary, smack, non-sequiturs and all around "crazy talk" is not (...) (17 years ago, 16-Jul-07, to lugnet.build, FTX) !
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Thanks for all the comments! All the suggestions so far have been most helpful. It seems the story is on the right track, which is good. The two most common "constructive criticisms" so far have been regarding showing who's speaking in the dialogue (...) (17 years ago, 16-Jul-07, to lugnet.build, FTX)
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Very Interesting! I like the cinematic feel you have achieved (I must try that sometime) and despite some dialogue difficulties the presentation is very tight, though maybe a giant 'next' button would be in order. I look forward to seeing more. God (...) (17 years ago, 14-Jul-07, to lugnet.build, FTX)
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(...) Very cool. I am hooked to the story already. :-) The only thing I would improve is a method of seeing who is talking. The icons idea mentioned above would work well, but even just the speaking character's name before each line would work. In (...) (17 years ago, 14-Jul-07, to lugnet.build, FTX)
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In lugnet.announce.moc, Tom Wilson wrote: I had a good laugh and really wonder how the story is going to develop! would it be possible to tell the number of slides when announcing an episode. don't need a countdown inside the show just some info if (...) (17 years ago, 14-Jul-07, to lugnet.build)
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