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Chapter 2: The Calling
http://www.lugnet.com/~1168/beyhadur/
Thoughts, criticism, and ideas are strongly requested.
Hopefully Chapter 3: the Rising will be done next week, but don't hold your
breath.. thats the long one.
_lenny
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| (...) love (just to name a few: the statue in the temple, the guy with two picks as weapons, and the image of the five brothers marching away from their battle -they look like such bad-a$$es...). ;) Can't wait to see what happens next. -Hendo (22 years ago, 6-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| Hey, Very nice. My favorite picture is the five warriors killing with rocks and sticks, but pehaps that reveals something about my subconscious that I'd rather not reveal. :) Bruce (22 years ago, 7-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) i looked at your epic and..... Totally did not understand it. I do not see what the guy in the black and the king saying "urk" have to do with each other...the font is rather hard to read, and it has alot of reffering to "god." It needs more (...) (22 years ago, 7-Feb-03, to lugnet.castle)
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