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Re: Chapter 1 of Subterfugitives now online!
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lugnet.general
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Sun, 2 Sep 2001 03:49:41 GMT
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In lugnet.general, Joel Kuester writes:
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> Disc One : Chapter One is now ready for viewing:
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> http://minispy.tripod.com/secret/
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> Nothing offensive in the story (yet), but as always; parental discretion is
> advised!
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> I'd love to hear any comments (either here or in the feedback link on the
> main page [or by email if you prefer to remain private]). Please keep in
> mind that this is not an 'episode' in and of itself, it is one chapter of a
> much larger story and merely introduces some of the basic story elements.
Excellent work, Joel. I really like the way you blended Lego & non-lego sets(1)
The detail work in some of the sets is fantastic; the lockers in the
hallway, and the office furniture felt especially well done to me.
My only quibble is that the chapter seems a bit slow, especially near the
beginning where you've got a lot of establishing shots. Those kinds of
"same scene, different angle" shots are really served well by being seen
together. It still worked, but I think it would have worked better if there
were multiple panels on a single page. Of course, I'm on a high-speed ADSL
connection, so I'm less affected by bandwidth issues. Multiple panels on a
page would probably really choke a slow connection. :/
thanks,
James
1:"sets" in the movie set sense, not the Lego kit sense, that is.
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| (...) I disagree. I put each image on a seperate page for a couple diferent reasons, in no particular order of importance: 1. faster loading (less chance of multiple people loading the same image, and less images per page) 2. Pacing. I find pacing (...) (23 years ago, 2-Sep-01, to lugnet.general)
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