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IOM: Sorjin's Comic 1: An Experiment
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Tue, 20 Nov 2001 00:46:24 GMT
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For the next thrilling installment of Sorjin's Adventures on the Isle of
Mist, I present Comic 1:
http://www.hafhead.com/lego/mycastle/iom/part03a.html
If you would like to read Sorjin's adventures from the beginning, you may
want to start at the index page:
http://www.hafhead.com/lego/mycastle/iom/index.html
For various reasons, I will not be doing Sorjin's whole story in comic
format- I plan on alternating between that and journals like I've used up
until now.
Enjoy, and as usual please let me know what you think. Criticism is
welcome- please help me get better! (Except please don't complain about the
lame "mist" special effects. I've already got plans to do that better in
the future.)
--
Tony Hafner
www.hafhead.com
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Message has 3 Replies:
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| (...) have a good mix of close-ups and distance shots. I also see that you introduced everyone to the Devil - a creature native to the East of the Isle. I'm not sure what else to say - the story was entertaining and the introduction of a race, while (...) (23 years ago, 20-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
| | | Re: IOM: Sorjin's Comic 1: An Experiment
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| (...) enjoy reading more about your characters' adventures. The comic format really works well! You've layed (laid?) it out very well. I really liked the comic and was thrilled to see a devil in the story. I had forgotten all about those cool Kahuka (...) (23 years ago, 20-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
| | | Re: IOM: Sorjin's Comic 1: An Experiment
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| (...) lines together with character development - it's clear that Sorjin is very serious about what he does. And that devil, woohoo!! Finally we've met the first intelligent (or semi-intelligent) creature on the Isle. Wow! I'm proud of us all guys, (...) (23 years ago, 20-Nov-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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