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There is a secret room under the castle, hidden far below the catacombs.
Follow Thietger the Royal Magician as he descends into the depths in search
of forbidden knowledge.
Just go to
http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw
It's listed first under Updates (beneath the castle) and is also accessable
through the Structures page.
As always, let me know what you think.
--William
The Kingdom of Gatimrja
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| (...) Just like your previous chapters, the description was almost an adventure in itself. (Did you purposely change the lighting conditions a bit dark to reflect the chamber's obscurity?) The detailing of the chamber was nicely done as well. (...) (21 years ago, 3-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| (...) William, Very nice, I like your catacomb design, and I like your foreboding story. It will be fun to read more. George (21 years ago, 3-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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| Hey William, this is a fun little story! I like the image of the book tied down with four chains. Looks so innocent.. but it so dangerous. Some criticism, when your guy (wizard,monk?) dies.. it takes a moment to tell he's died. I'd recommend adding (...) (21 years ago, 7-Mar-03, to lugnet.castle)
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