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Re: Preview of My Castleworld Site
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lugnet.castle, lugnet.space
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Sat, 13 May 2000 13:40:27 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Richard Marchetti writes:
> Find it here:
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> http://members.aol.com/blueofnoon/lego/blaktron.htm
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> Feedback of any kind will be gratefully accepted.
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> -- Richard
Oooooh! Ahhhhhh!
I love it, it's great!
Feedback... as in, rationally :-)...:
The story is great. Personally, I had to read it twice to get it, but that's
because I tend to unconsciously skip a sentence or two at times - and every
sentence here was vital to understanding. That's not a bad thing, just perhaps
something to think of.
The pretext (Ladyship Black Pearl) gives a great touch of mystery and intrigue
to the story.... her torso is lovely, BTW.
I just can't wait to see how you manage to involve space-travel in CW... it's
a fabulous idea! Mixing themes is always fun (though I never would've
thought :-)
All in all, great job! I'll be expecting the sequel!
-Shiri
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