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Re: One-man long range ship "Solo"
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lugnet.space
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Mon, 3 Sep 2001 21:53:07 GMT
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In lugnet.space, Tobias Möller writes:
> Okay, so what's wrong with it? I know some of you have been to the
> gallery page, so why hasn't anyone responded?
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> In case you don't remember, I was one of thoswe who started the
> "feedback" discussions a while back...
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> Several other creations have recieved responses, why not mine? Is it
> something wrong with it? Then tell me! That's the point of Lugnet! To
> comment, criticize and encourage each other, so we can evolve into
> better builders!
Well... Since you asked...
(bag-o-criticism is now fully open, please note these are my own criticisms)
- The main colour is yellow, why not add a secondary highlight colour?
- The front canopies are a different colour than the rear ones, this throws
off the "unity"/"harmony" of the model.
- You use way too many curved arches, those are fine for castles, but don't
look good one spacecraft.
- The craft looks slightly blocky.
- The engines look basic, try making up more elaborate ones.
- Some studs on top are exposed.
- You used two Town fences on the top; they look like "Town" fences (i.e. don't
belong there).
Otherwise, it's a very nice model.
Ever seen my [1] "Elephant" Rapid Interstellar Transport? It has a slightly
similar design, and doesn't have a nice interior (unlike your craft which is
nicely furnished). ;-)
BTW in the future, a simple repost will work much better.
Mladen Pejic, over and out!
http://www3.sympatico.ca/mladenpejic/
[1] http://www3.sympatico.ca/mladenpejic/Elephant.htm
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> --Tobias
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> Tobias Möller wrote:
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> > See it at http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=6660
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> > It's sort of a "houseboat in space", with a living room, bed, toilet etc.
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> > More details can be found in the "solo.txt" file in my Brickshelf gallery.
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> > Please let me know what you think of it!
> > --Tobias
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