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After a short break taken from the writing process, but
a load of great ideas to put on paper, I decided to take
anothr shot at writing chapter six, with promising results.
Parts two and three have been posted, and are ready for
public viewing, which include.
Chapter six, part two: After Dash arrives in the swamps
of the Cawdor region, trudging through the oily and cold
water, he is once again subjected to the rigors of
inter-regional travel, and intensified bickering between
members of his entourage. The second act includes the scene
in which Skye and president Ludan arrive at Allercus, famished
and tired from their journey. Only twenty minutes into their
reception, Ludan's state of health fails, as he succumbs
to both his severe battle wounds and a rather unsettling
series of ramblings. The part concludes itself with the
resumption of Dash's journey into Cawdor, and a surprise
attack by a Gariland-Mingard serpent, which strikes him
with a paralyzing venom. Dash falls into disarray at
this point, and collapses, only to have visions of his
wife and son beckon him to death...but he abstains from
leaving the physical world.
http://www.lugnet.com/~1112/Fantasy/Conscripted
Chapter six, part three deals with Dash's awakening
in a generated version of his domicile, only to once
again experience the disheartening vision of his
wife and son's death, as well as his betrayal, thus
opening old wounds. For the first time, Dash perceives
the true extent of his abilities, and once again,
encounters his father, Ludandrian, whom speaks to
him about his sub-conscious depression, and about
the Hybrid Metamorphose Theory theory. Concluding
the chapter, Dash is relieved of his physiological
block by Ludandrian's hacking attempt, and attains
a further grip on reality.
http://www.lugnet.com/~1112/Fantasy/Sporadic
<<_Matt Hein_>>
Fellow lego enthusiast
O s p r e y
http://www.lugnet.com/~1112/Creations/
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