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Hello, well after the last month or so of
writing chapter five of my story, (No, I
didn't stop writing after the constructive
criticism :) I'm pleased to announce the
next section of my story.
Yes, I realize this is a bit off topic, but
.castle is way too quiet and I think some
discussion would be nice to read.
Here's the address
http://www.lugnet.com/~1112/Fantasy/Eidolon
Your Comments/ criticism are appreciated,
thanks!
<<_Matt Hein_>>
Fellow lego enthusiast
O s p r e y
Also, suggestions on revising anything
yo find irrelevant or repetitive would
aid in the quality of the story.
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