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| Hey Shiri, cool story! You did a great job in introducing us to several new characters and I got a better feel for what was going on in Helfire. Emmy's house was pretty cool too, I liked the way the slopes gradually, well, sloped up toward the (...) (23 years ago, 18-May-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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| (...) I'm glad you did! I think that was my main point - to give a little more info, background, fill you in on the details. Someday I hope to put all my chapters in a totally stand-alone format, with no structure or character descriptions or (...) (23 years ago, 20-May-01, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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