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(...) I really liked your story so far. Great photography too. I was a little puzzled as to who was saying what in the following snippet: The creature turns around to see a sentry guard. “What is it?” it asks the guard. “Who are you,” repeats the (...) (26 years ago, 15-May-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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(...) ~Nathan (26 years ago, 15-May-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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Shiri, You've done a fanastic job (as usual)! I thoroughly enjoy seeing the creativity you constantly show in your creations ans now your wonderful storyline. Keep up the great work. (26 years ago, 15-May-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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Hey Shiri, great job on Chapter 1! I like the robe on Scar, it looks better than just one on the back. That's pretty cool that you have characters from other people's realms integrated into your stories. It really makes you think more about what is (...) (26 years ago, 15-May-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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Wonderful Job, Shiri! I really enjoy how much personality your characters have. I like the camera angles used for the pictures of the sentry guard chasing URU (the creature). The story was great, nice job of introducing some of your characters, (...) (26 years ago, 15-May-00, to lugnet.castle.org.cw)
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