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Re: Underneath the castle
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Fri, 7 Mar 2003 04:14:10 GMT
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Hey William,
this is a fun little story! I like the image of the book tied down with four
chains. Looks so innocent.. but it so dangerous.
Some criticism, when your guy (wizard,monk?) dies.. it takes a moment to tell
he's died. I'd recommend adding some blood (1x1 trans-red plate/tile) or
turning his head slightly to the side. that way we don't see his eyes and
smiling mouth as clearly and helps give the impression he's been killed. OR
you could go into photoshop and give him "x" for eyes and toung sticking out.
But criticism aside, really a cool little ditty.
I'm eagerly await the next chapter to your story!
-Lenny
In lugnet.castle, William Movish writes:
> There is a secret room under the castle, hidden far below the catacombs.
> Follow Thietger the Royal Magician as he descends into the depths in search
> of forbidden knowledge.
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> Just go to
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> http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw
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> It's listed first under Updates (beneath the castle) and is also accessable
> through the Structures page.
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> As always, let me know what you think.
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> --William
> The Kingdom of Gatimrja
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