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Re: My site is up
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lugnet.castle
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Thu, 28 Feb 2002 16:59:36 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, William Movish writes:
> Hi all,
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> My castle site is finally up! Some of the sections are less finished than
> others (the Structures page only contains one structure, for instance), but
> there's still a lot to look at.
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> Any comments, questions and/or criticisms would be appreciated.
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> http://home.earthlink.net/~ynpw/index.html
I love the story- that's a wonderful way to set up a character! And using
avatar-style icons to represent who's talking works very well. The "story
within a story" also reads quite smoothly- I think the banter between the
tavern's inhabitants adds a lot.
Your range of character bios is large and well-integrated with a lot of
interesting stories crying out to be told.
The site has a very clean design too- low-tech and very navigable. Those
are both good things. Oh, and you have a cool spider, too.
I do have one suggestion regarding the image of two chrome swords that you
use as a divider all over the place: Change it to a .gif and make the
background transparent. The current background is suffering from
compression artifacts and doesn't match the page background.
--
Tony Hafner
www.hafhead.com
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