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Re: a preview of my work.........not that great but hey check it out anyway
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lugnet.castle
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Mon, 28 Jan 2002 20:13:04 GMT
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pretty cool, can't wait for pictures. only complaint is that a few times
before a quote you skipped out on a letter. otherwise excellent story and i
am waiting for more
In lugnet.castle, Joey Finnell writes:
> hey everybody heres some of my work in progress....i hope to have the pix of
> the accual scene soon
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> As the rain came down, the knight’s road throw the forest of evil
> chasing a thief from the town of Cloreia.
>
> "Come back hear thief!" shouted one of the knights.
>
> The thief ran into apart of the forest that was thought to be haunted.
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> "I see you're trapped thief, give it to us and we'll let you live."
> commanded the knight "I'm warning you thief give us the stone now!"
>
> Suddenly an arrow hit one of the knight’s in the chest.
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> "Aahhh!" screamed the knight hit by the arrow
> "What the hell?!" said one of the knights
> "ilbert it’s about time you showed up."Said the thief
> "Let him go!" shouted a mysterious person
> "Why should I?" asked the knight.
> "If you don't you'll be the next one who screams from the piercing pain!"
> shouted the mysterious person
> "ll I want is the stone and than we'll leave him alone." said the knight
> "General Falcon??" asked Gilbert
> "That's my name." said the knight
> "I thought I smelled scum,What do you want the stone for?" asked Gilbert
> "That’s none of your concern!" said General Falcon
> "It is now!" said Gilbert
> "If you won’t give us the stone than we'll just have to kill you for it,
> Attack!!!" screamed General Falcon.
>
> Suddenly before any of the knight’s could swing their sword a flame
> burst right in front of them.
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> "Stop right there!" shouted a stranger coming out of the flame.
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> As the knights stopped their horses the stranger spoke again.
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> "Leave my friends alone!" commanded the stranger.
> "Who are you?" asked the knight.
> "Eric Kyroz, now get out of my forest before I turn you and your knights
> into a black mark in the ground!" commanded Eric.
> "We'll leave, but this isn't over yet wizard! shouted General Falcon as him
> and the others ran off.
> "Thanks for the help guys” said the thief.
> "No problem Malak now lets get out of here before they come back with twice
> as many knights." suggested Eric.
> "You're right let's go!" commanded Gilbert.
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