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Re: Chapter two of my Unnamed chronicles up
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lugnet.castle.org, lugnet.castle
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Mon, 17 Dec 2001 17:29:53 GMT
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In lugnet.castle.org, Adrian Drake writes:
> Here's the second installment of the adventures of Xander and Serena, plus
> the first pictures of my latest MOC (which will be published some time this
> weekend.)
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> Find Into the Woods at:
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> http://www.brickfrenzy.com/castle_cw_02a.html
Wonderful! I love the interplay between the characters, though the
"Smothers brothers" bit was getting really close to the line. The ship is
beautiful.
I hate to make this recommendation because I know exactly how this affects
the comic style, but... a lot of the pictures seem overly wordy. It's
really hard to squeeze in multiple exchanges between a pair of characters in
a single frame and still have it read well. I think it would flow better if
you split some of the frames into two or even three.
I know that's hard and I'm currently dealing with this exact issue in my
next comic installment... I have a lot of conversation that has to get said,
but there isn't any action going on. I'm trying to keep it from doubling
the size of the comic, but I don't think I can get around it. I'm sure you
don't want to shoot that many more pics either- I don't have to tell you how
much work it is to do all that editing. I think this is already the largest
frame count I've seen in a Lego story done comic-style.
--
Tony Hafner
www.hafhead.com
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