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Subject:	My first vignette--The Apology
Newsgroups:	lugnet.build.vignette, lugnet.announce.moc
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Date:	Fri, 21 Apr 2006 02:33:05 GMT
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This MOC was built to compliment a haiku I recently wrote. The haiku is titled “The Apology.”

I like you, but not
Enough to take you to the
Hospital. Sorry.

Please let me know what you think.

Derek

Message has 4 Replies:

		Re: My first vignette--The Apology
(...) I think that's the funniest haiku I've ever read, and the vig matches it perfectly. Awesomes. (URL) [ j o n ] (URL) [ z e m i d o t n e t ]> :: creations :: moonbase :: shipyard (19 years ago, 21-Apr-06, to lugnet.build.vignette, FTX)

		Re: My first vignette--The Apology
(...) Get over it dude Make peace with your mom, she is not that bad in bed Awesome D, you hit one out of the park on your first vig attempt. So...what, you're the soldier-poet now? I bet that plays well with the Ukrainian girls. -Keith (19 years ago, 24-Apr-06, to lugnet.build.vignette)

		Re: My first vignette--The Apology
(...) Teddy Kennedy, eat your heart out! (19 years ago, 25-Apr-06, to lugnet.build.vignette, FTX)

		Re: My first vignette--The Apology
(...) Your poetry, like A kick to the groin, causes Scrotal discomfort. Yay, haiku! This is a festive vignette. Very reminiscent of one of my favorite jokes of all time. -nk (19 years ago, 27-Apr-06, to lugnet.build.vignette, FTX)

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