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This MOC was built to compliment a haiku I recently wrote. The haiku is titled
The Apology.
I like you, but not
Enough to take you to the
Hospital. Sorry.
Please let me know what you think.
Derek
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| (...) I think that's the funniest haiku I've ever read, and the vig matches it perfectly. Awesomes. (URL) [ j o n ] (URL) [ z e m i d o t n e t ]> :: creations :: moonbase :: shipyard (18 years ago, 21-Apr-06, to lugnet.build.vignette, FTX)
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| (...) Get over it dude Make peace with your mom, she is not that bad in bed Awesome D, you hit one out of the park on your first vig attempt. So...what, you're the soldier-poet now? I bet that plays well with the Ukrainian girls. -Keith (18 years ago, 24-Apr-06, to lugnet.build.vignette)
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