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Re: WANTED: Persons To Read My Trial Story! plz
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lugnet.castle
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Fri, 1 Sep 2000 23:38:31 GMT
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In lugnet.castle, Wilson Raska writes:
> Hey Ryan, great story! I couldn't resist taking the bait :) A couple things
> about your story though. The background you have chosen kind of interferes
> with the text and makes it harder to read. May I suggest a solid background,
> maybe? Also, the story could use a little proofreading, not that I should be
> the one to talk. Other than that, it looks great, please share more! Will
> there be pictures for the stories in the future?
Thankyou very much for taking a look at my story! Also thanx for the hints on
the story background, i will definetly be changeing that. As far as
proofreading, hehehe, i know, i know! :) I got my dad to read the story after
I had posted it online and he had fun pointing out all the errors to me. :)
Also, thankyou for the really nice comments, and pictures will definetly be
coming along to go with the text.
> Wilson
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> P.S. Where did you come up with the name for your "Sir Locke"? I got my
> Locke's name from FFVI, is that where you derived your's from. Just
> interested s'all.
I got the name Locke from a John Grisham book called "The Firm", the bad guy
in the book is called Nathan Locke.
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> In lugnet.castle, Ryan Cassell writes:
> > I've thought up a story to go along with my castle MOC's and I've put one
> > page up on the internet as a trial page to hopefully get some feedback.
> >
> > I have lots of story material, so I'm wondering if there are anybody fans of
> > castle lego out there that would be interested in my story. If noone is
> > interested, then there's really no point in putting the stories on the
> > internet. So I'm just looking for some people to read my trial page and give
> > me some feedback, whether it be postitive or negative.
> >
> > If anyone is interested to play judge, or just to read the story, here's the
> > link: http://www.members.home.net/ryancassell
> >
> > Hopefully someone will take this bait and go to the link. :)
> >
> > The main reason that I'm doing these stories is because I've been so inspired
> > by other peoples stories involving their castle characters. Thankyou in
> > advance! :)
> >
> > Happy Building!!
> >
> > Ryan Cassell (pre-AFOL)
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| Hey Ryan, great story! I couldn't resist taking the bait :) A couple things about your story though. The background you have chosen kind of interferes with the text and makes it harder to read. May I suggest a solid background, maybe? Also, the (...) (24 years ago, 1-Sep-00, to lugnet.castle)
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